{"id":315,"date":"2012-07-13T03:03:59","date_gmt":"2012-07-13T03:03:59","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.chukyoeibei.org\/uslh\/?page_id=315"},"modified":"2015-04-19T01:34:45","modified_gmt":"2015-04-19T01:34:45","slug":"making-revisions","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"http:\/\/www.chukyoeibei.org\/uslh\/?page_id=315","title":{"rendered":"4. Revising Your Essay"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>See this page with <a href=\"http:\/\/www.popjisyo.com\/WebHint\/AddHint.aspx?d=1&amp;e=iso-8859-1&amp;r=e&amp;s=0&amp;du=http%253a%252f%252fwww.m-w.com%252fcgi-bin%252fdictionary%253fbook%253dDictionary%2526va%253d&amp;u=http%253a%252f%252fwww.chukyoeibei.org%252fuslh%252f%253fpage_id%253d315\">Japanese pop-up notes (\u00e7\u00bf\u00bb\u00e8\u00a8\u00b3)<\/a><\/p>\n<p>Revisions include corrections to grammar and spelling as well as major changes to your essay: re-writing the thesis statement, improving the title, adding more support to your points, and many others.<\/p>\n<p>Read through the essay carefully and look at my comments and suggestions for improvement.<\/p>\n<p>The most important parts to revise are (1) the introduction and (2) the thesis statement and the (3) body paragraphs.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Evaluation Form<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/www.chukyoeibei.org\/uslh\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/poetry-eval-form.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-317\" title=\"poetry-eval-form\" src=\"http:\/\/www.chukyoeibei.org\/uslh\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/poetry-eval-form.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"736\" height=\"560\" srcset=\"http:\/\/www.chukyoeibei.org\/uslh\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/poetry-eval-form.jpg 736w, http:\/\/www.chukyoeibei.org\/uslh\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/poetry-eval-form-300x228.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 736px) 100vw, 736px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>See this page with Japanese pop-up notes (\u00e7\u00bf\u00bb\u00e8\u00a8\u00b3) Revisions include corrections to grammar and spelling as well as major changes to your essay: re-writing the thesis statement, improving the title, adding more support to your points, and many others. Read through the essay carefully and look at my comments and suggestions for improvement. The most&hellip;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"parent":437,"menu_order":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":{"footnotes":""},"class_list":["post-315","page","type-page","status-publish","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.chukyoeibei.org\/uslh\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/pages\/315","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.chukyoeibei.org\/uslh\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.chukyoeibei.org\/uslh\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.chukyoeibei.org\/uslh\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.chukyoeibei.org\/uslh\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=315"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"http:\/\/www.chukyoeibei.org\/uslh\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/pages\/315\/revisions"}],"up":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.chukyoeibei.org\/uslh\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/pages\/437"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.chukyoeibei.org\/uslh\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=315"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}